Question

书面表达（共１题，计20分）

假如你叫张霖，明年就要进入高中(senior middle school)学习。由于住校 (live at school) 与住在家里各有利弊，你想通过e-mail征求英国笔友Bill的意见。内容应包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。

注意：1、字数要控制在100词左右。

2、不要出现你的真实姓名。

3、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。

Dear Bill,

How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.

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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.

Please write back soon.

Yours，

Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Bill,

How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.

I’m going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home. But I can’t decide because both have advantages and disadvantages.

At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with 5-6 students at school. Maybe I can’t sleep well. It’s a problem. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think it’s great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school. It’s a waste of time and not safe.

It’s so hard to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.

Please write back soon.

Yours,

Zhang Lin

【解析】

试题分析：此篇文章让小作者介绍住校和在家的利弊。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I can live either at school or at home. But I can’t decide because both have advantages and disadvantages. Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think it’s great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查话题类作文。