Question

假如你叫李华，是阳光镇的一名中学生。你想在学校创建一个英语角，为此，你在班级学生中展开调查，调查结果如下。请根据表格中的内容，用英语写一篇短文，描述同学们的看法和理由，并发表自己的观点。

???????? 观点	?????????????????? 理由
65%的同学赞成	提高英语口语水平 获得知识，开阔视野 学会与人交流
35%的同学反对	1. 作业多，没时间 2. 英语不好，不敢开口
你的观点	….

要求：1）短文应包括所给所有信息， 并适当发挥。

????? 2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。

????? 3）词数：100词左右。开头已给，不计入总词数。

?? We plan to set up an English Corner in our school. To know about what the students think about it, we’ve made a survey about it in our class. Here are the results.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We plan to set up English Corner in out school. To know about what the students think about it , we’ve made a survey about it in our class . Here are the results.

?? 65% of the students think it’s a good idea to set an English Corner. Firstly ,they can improve their spoken English by joining it . Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds. Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.

However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it . Others are not good at English, as a result , they are afraid of speaking English in front of others.

In my opinion, I think we should set up an English Corner to practice speaking Englsih. If so , we will be more and more confident of using English.

【解析】试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语set up建立； communicate with与某人交流； as a result 结果；are afraid of 害怕；in front of在。。前面； In my opinion在我看来； practice dong sth练习做某事。Secondly, students can not only get knowledge but also open their minds.在这个句子中not only ..but also 连接两个并列的谓语动词，时态保持一致。Thirdly , students will learn how to communicate with others.这句子中特殊疑问词+不定式做动词的宾语。However, 35%of the students don’t think so. Some of them are so busy with their homework that they have no time for it .这个句子中用到so…that ..如此以致于。

考点： 提纲类作文。