Question

英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。
内容要点及要求：
1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；
2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；
3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard
Monday, June 30                                                            Sunny
This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Monday, June 30     Sunny
This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.
I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.
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试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，时态较为复杂，注意时态一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:set an example for为……树立榜样；used to do sth过去常常做某事；take care of照顾；try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事；强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。