Question

书面表达（20分）

假设你叫李明，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐张航。请根据表格内容

写一封100词左右的推荐信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

姓 名	张航
特 长	精通电脑，擅长演讲…
性格、品质	自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人…
个人事迹	经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外的工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎 …

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

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I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers.

He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities.

He is very helpful too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.?????????????????????

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇向班主任王老师推荐张航做班长的推荐信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如I think……；He is……；He never minds……；I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。最后希望老师考虑自己的推荐。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了推荐张航最为我们的新班长，接下来介绍张航的特长，性格品质和个人事迹，最后希望老师考虑我的推荐。此处用了be good at, spend time doing sth，mind doing sth, be popular with 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。