Question

书面表达（15分）

你的理想是什么？为什么选择这样的理想？你打算怎样去实现它？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文。

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Answer 1

My dream

I want to be an artist when I grow up. I like drawing. When I was a little kid, I ever won the first in a drawing competition. I hope to have my own art room. I am taking art lessons every weekend. My art teacher is kind to me. But he is strict with me. I think he can help me to make my dream come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给思路比较清晰，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: My art teacher is kind to me.我的美术老师对我很好；I think he can help me to make my dream come true.我认为他会帮助我实现我的梦想。学习中应注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。