Question

为迎接青奥会，我市提出“大干一百天，环境大扫除”的口号。南京阳光中学积极响应，在学生中广泛征集参与该活动的创意。请根据以下征集到的创意写一篇倡议书，并提出你自己的一个“金点子”。
创意：1. 向世界展示中学生的新形象，在公共场合要有礼貌，例如（列举一例）
2.志愿为人们提供帮助，例如（列举一例）
3.到公共场所分发宣传单，号召人们保护环境，例如（列举一例）
4. 去公园参加劳动；
5. 你的金点子(……)
要求：1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Working hard for the YOG
The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up. The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.

Answer 1

Working hard for the YOG
The Second Youth Olympic Games are coming up. The government calls on Nanjing citizens to keep the environment around us clean and tidy by working hard.Our school held an activity to seek the ideas in response to the call of the government.
Many students took part in this activity and gave us so much advice.For example,showing we middle students new images to the public with offering their seats to the old people.Being a volunteer to show the way for foreigners.To pass out leaflets in public to call for protecting environment and so on.
In my opinion，we also can help do some cleaning.Whatever we do,even if very tiny,what we want is to make a contribution to the YOG.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：take part in“参加”；in my opinion“在我看来”；make a contribution to“为……做贡献”以及一些复合句的使用。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。