Question

假如你叫王明，根据下面内容，用英语向你的笔友Leo介绍一下你家乡四季的气候特点。不少于80字，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

春天：温暖，阳光明媚，蝴蝶在花丛中飞舞。在有风的日子里放风筝。

夏天：炎热，白天最高温度达到40度。喜欢呆在池塘边，树荫下。

秋天：凉爽，树叶变黄，落在地上一堆堆，非常美丽。农民收货庄稼。

冬天：寒冷，白雪覆盖一切，看不到美丽的花，天很冷，但我们喜欢在外面堆雪人。

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Answer 1

Dear Leo,

I love my hometown and I hope you can come and visit it one day.

Take care

Wang Ming

Dear Leo,

I am glad to hear from you. I am writing to you to tell you the weather in my hometown.

In spring it is sunny and warm. You can see many butterflies dancing on flowers. When there is wind, we often fly kites in the fields. In summer it is very hot and the temperature can reach 40 degree. We like staying beside ponds to keep cool . In autumn it is cool and beautiful. Leaves grow yellow and fallen leaves are everywhere. Farmers are busy harvesting crops . In winter it is cold . When it snows, we like to play with snow and make snowmen.

I love my hometown and I hope you can come and visit it one day.

Take care

Wang Ming

Dear Leo,

【解析】

试题分析：

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍自己家乡的一年四季。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯，同时给出的要点都要写到文章中。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的全部要点，并适当改动，使用的句式有简单句，并列句和复合句，灵活多变，而且层次分明。通过一些这些句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，同时使用了when引导的时间状语从句和短语如：be busy doing使得短文既流畅又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的家乡有了一个比较全面的了解。