Question

书面表达（10分）

下面是Tina 同学给Jane 的回信，信中提到学习英语的几条建议，根据Tina提的建议，用英语完成下面建议。写一篇80词左右的文章。文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

建议：1）上课要认真听讲；

2）每天大声读新单词；

3）课堂尽可能多讲英语；

4）把错误写在笔记本里；

5）读读英语故事，看看英语电影；

6）但不必逐词理解；

7）与英国人交笔友，常写信。

Dear Jane，

I am very glad to hear from you .How to learn English well ? I will give you some advice . I think it is very important to learn English well. You

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Yours

Tina

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Jane，

I am very glad to hear from you. How to learn English well? I will give you some advice. I think it is very important to learn English well. You should listen to the teacher carefully in class. It is a good idea to read the new words aloud every day. Try to speak English as much as possible in class, and write down the mistakes in the notebooks. You had better read English stories and watch some English films. You don’t need to understand every word. Why not find some English pen friends? You can often write to them. It’s helpful to learn English.

Yours

Tina

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在及将来时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: be glad to很高兴做某事；hear from听说；it is adj to do sth做某事怎么样；as much as possible尽可能地；had better do sth最好做某事；why not do sth为什么不做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

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