Question

书面表达:( 10分)

在每个人的成长过程中或多或少会有一些改变，请以“How I’ve Changed!”为题写一段话，介绍一下你的过去与现在的不同。词数：60--80词左右。

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Answer 1

How I’ve changed!

My life on weekends has changed a lot in the past two years．You know I used to go shopping with my mother, and I played sports with friends on weekends．But now I have no time to play．I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day．At night, I used to watch TV, read a newspaper or a magazine and I could also chat online．Now, I feel stressed out．I have to do lots of homework．Sometimes I have to study for the tests．It is boring．I really miss the old days

【解析】:

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。要求以第一人称的方式叙述自己在过去和现在的学习生活的不同。主要用到两种时态：一般现在时和一般过去时态（uesd to do句式）。所给内容已经很是详细，只要注意句式结构正确，文章调理连贯就可以了。

【亮点说明】这篇短文短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误。能正确运用句式uesd to do的结构；I feel stressed out；I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day，这些句子和短语也为文章增色不少，适当的运用了连词，使文章更紧凑。

考点：提纲作文