Question

14．你一定有出去游玩的经历吧，请你以"A trip to…"为题，写一篇游记．要求：
①将题目补充完整； ②包括下列要点：Where did you go？When did you start your trip？Who did you go with？How did you get there？What activities did you do there？How did you feel about the trip？③篇幅在80词左右．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：We played games first，and then we went boating on the lake．我们先玩游戏，然后在湖上划船．play game玩游戏．go boating去划船．在湖上用介词on．
句型二：At noon，we had lunch in the restaurant near the park．中午，我们在公园附近的餐馆吃午饭．at noon在中午，had lunch吃午饭，have的过去式是had．in the restaurant在餐馆里．near the park在公园附近．

解答 A trip to Binhai City
last Sunday，（时间）I finished my homework．I was free．My parents took me to Binhai Park．（地点） We went there by bus（交通工具）．On the road，I was excited．Half an hour later，we got there．I got off the bus quickly．We played games first，and then we went boating on the lake．【高分句型一】We took many photos there．We had a great time（玩得开心）．At noon，we had lunch in the restaurant near the park【高分句型二】．After lunch，（吃饭）we went shopping in the street（购物）．My parents bought many snacks and books for me．At about 6 o'clock，we took a bus home．（回家）

点评 写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题．日常积累一些短语和词句．