Question

5．根据下列图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文，要求叙述完整．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画说说同学们一起度过的一天．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；同学们讨论怎过周六，决定去爬山，野餐，打扫卫生把垃圾扔垃圾桶里

 
常用到的重点短语：
advise doing sth 建议做某事
decide to do sth 决定去做某事
pick up 捡起
have fun 玩的开心
【高分句型】
1．Last Friday we had a discussion on what to do on Saturday．
疑问词+to do结构 作为on 的宾语．
2．①As is known to us all，②it's everyone's duty to protect the environment．
①As is known to us all正如我们所知道的
②it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
3．Although we were all tired，we were very happy
aithough虽然，引导的让步状语从句，不能和but连用．

解答 Last Friday we had a discussion on what to do on Saturday．【高分句型】Different people have different opinions．Some advised going to Children's Palace to have fun，others suggested going boating in the beautiful park．（第一幅图）Finally we decided to to go climbing and have a picnic in the open air．We started early on Saturday morning and reached the top of the mountain．（第二幅图）We had a picnic and talked happily．（第三幅图）After that we picked up the rubbish and threw it into the dustbin．（第四幅图）As is known to us all，it's everyone's duty to protect the environment．【高分句型】Although we were all tired，we were very happy．【高分句型】

点评 本篇书面表达要求学生正确描述图片，根据图片发挥自己的想象，准确描述．在写作时，应运用正确的时态记述事情，运用词组和丰富的句型．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．
本文行文流畅，语言运用娴熟．恰当使用了一般过去时，并且能熟练运用连词或过渡词：although，finally，after that．同时，能够根据图片，准确地运用词组进行表达．