Question

12．初中生活即将结束，丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆．根据图表提示，选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述．

内容包括：1）此次活动的过程；
2）你的收获或感受．
要求：1）词数：80-100．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
My junior school life is coming to an end．I had a lot of sweet memories．      ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是根据图表提示，选择一次你最喜欢的活动进行描述并谈谈自己的感受．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）最喜欢的活动是什么
2）此次活动的过程；
3）你的收获或感受．
常用到的重点短语：
share with sb…与某人分享…
concentrate on sth 专注于…
encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
cheer up 使兴奋
with the help of sb 在某人的帮助下
make efforts 努力
for the first time第一次
【高分句型】
1．①When thinking of losing of the center，we were all down and couldn't ②concentrate on the next match．
①When thinking of losing of the center是when we are thinking of losing of the center的缩写．作为时间状语．
②concentrate on sth 专注于…
 2．①Seeing our captains waving his injured finger，we ②made our biggest efforts in the following games．
①现在分词作为伴随状语．
②make efforts 努力
3．I would never forget it ①because I understood the importance of teamwork②for the first time．
①because引导的原因状语从句．
②for the first time第一次

解答 My junior school life is coming to an end．I had a lot of sweet memories．Of them，I'd like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game．（最喜欢的活动篮球比赛）Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams．However，our captain hurt his finger during the third game．He is the brain of our team．When thinking of losing of the center，we were all down and couldn't concentrate on the next match．【高分句型】Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up．With the help of our captain，we played as well as the first two games．Seeing our captains waving his injured finger，we made our biggest efforts in the following games．【高分句型】With the cheers of our students，we won the champion．During the celebrations，we threw our captain into the air（活动的过程）．I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time．【高分句型】（我的感受）

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．