分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们根据要求写一篇关于"最大的个人变化"的作文,内容是开放的,需要我们发挥自己的想象力、创造力和思维力,把这些内容补充完整.由题目可知,写作时主要要用第一人称,时态为一般过去时和一般现在时,内容要点包括:变化是什么、变化是如何发生的以及变化后的感受.
重要短语及高分句型:
fall in love with
爱上
not…at all
一点也不
spend time
消磨时间
The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
我做过的最大改变是我喜欢上了阅读.I've ever made作the biggest personal change的定语,省略了关系词that;后面的that I have fallen in love with reading是表语从句;fall in love with爱上,重点短语.
Gradually I began to love reading.
逐渐地我开始喜爱阅读.gradually逐渐地,副词作状语;begin to do sth.开始去做某事;love doing sth.喜爱做某事;用法都很重要.
While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man.
当我阅读时,感觉就像跟一个有智慧的人交谈.while reading=while I'm reading,while要与进行时连用;like介词,像;talk with sb.与某人交谈.
解答 One possible version:
The biggest personal change I've ever made
The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.(高分句型)(变化)
When I was a child,I didn't enjoy books at all.Later,my mother always read stories for me and bought me books.Gradually I began to love reading.(变化的发生)While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man.(高分句型)Reading is also a fantastic way to spend my free time.(变化后的感受)
Books are my friends.And they will benefit me a lot.
点评 写提纲作文时,首先要看懂提纲所表达的内容,还要注意,文章必须要覆盖整个要点,行文要注意简化,不要拖沓冗长,要使用正确的句子,同时注意,要使用一定的连接词,比如:first,second,what's more,finally等.再者,在作文完成时要注意检查、修改,如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上,再抄到答题纸上,这样更容易得高分.最后,注意使用一些句型和短语,使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅,方能成就一篇好的作文.
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