Question

书面表达（共10分）

假如你是育才中学的学生刘海,你和同学张红一起向学校吴校长推荐同学李涛为学生会主席,请用英语写一篇推荐稿,内容要点如下:

1、李涛，九年级一班班长。

2、聪明,几次数学竞赛得奖。谦虚, 从不炫耀.

3、自信,不怕当众演讲。活泼,善于交流。 4、组织能力强……

5、认为他是学生会主席的最合适的人选,希望得到校长同意。

注意：

1、推荐信必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2、第 4点必须用2-3句话适当发挥；

3、词数90个左右,文章开头已经给出,不计入总次数。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Tao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he has many good qualities for this position.

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Yours sincerely,

Liu Hai Zhang Hong

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Tao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he has many good qualities for this position.

Li Tao is the monitor of Class 1 Grade 9. He is clever. He has won several maths competitions, but he is modest and never shows off. He is confident. He is not afraid of speaking in front of many people. He is lively and is good at communicating with others. He is very organized. He plans his study and work very well. He has successfully organized many class meetings.

We think Li Tao is the most suitable person to be the chairman of the Students’ Union. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Hai Zhang Hong

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以刘海的身份，和同学张红一起向学校吴校长写一封推荐信，推荐李涛同学做学生会的主席。题目中给我们列出了短文中需要包括的要点，我们需要将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。我们要从李涛同学的学习、性格、爱好、能力等方面介绍一下李涛的情况，说明他是学生会主席的合适人选。介绍这些情况时，我们只需要用一般现在时态来表述就行，并且主语都是第三人称李涛，因此我们要特别注意每句话中谓语动词的形式。其中要特别注意第四点中，我们需要用自己的话来讲这一条补充完整，这就需要我们发挥自己的想象力，补充的内容要符合上下文的文意。写作时，要适当使用一些句型、句式，使文章表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，作者按照题目的要求，将李涛的情况介绍了一下，觉得他是学生会主席的合适人选。作者从李涛的学习情况、性格爱好、组织能力等方面，介绍了李涛，从这些方面可以看出，李涛是可以胜任学生会主席的工作的。作文中作者主要使用了一般现在时态，第三人称单数形式，每个句子中的谓语动词的形式都很准确。短文中也使用了一些好的句式，这些句式增强了文章的表现力，如He has won several maths competitions, but he is modest and never shows off.、He is not afraid of speaking in front of many people、He has successfully organized many class meetings.、We think Li Tao is the most suitable person to be the chairman of the Students’ Union等。

考点：提纲类作文。