Question

书面表达 (20分)

假设你是Andy，九年级学生。你的笔友David想了解你的近况，请根据下面的要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件，说明自己的情况，并请他给你提一些建议。

要点提示：

1. 喜欢看动作片，最喜欢的电影明星成龙（Jackie Chan），因为他把幽默和激烈的动作相结合，喜欢买与他有关的书籍，CD等，父母认为浪费钱；

2. 勤劳，从不介意为班级多做一些额外工作。

3. 喜欢动物，了解到目前有许多动物正快速消失。认为动物是我们的朋友，我们应该保护他们。

4. 现在学习上遇到一些麻烦，无法做到既认真学习又有时间从事自己的爱好，父母只关心考试后的分数。不知如何处理这些问题。

注意：词数100词左右。文中不得出现真实姓名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

From: Andy @126.com

To: David@163.com

Subject: something about yourself

Date: November 28th

Dear David,

I’m happy to write to you. _________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.

Andy

Answer 1

One possible version：

From: Andy @126.com

To: David@163.com

Subject: something about yourself

Date: November 28th

Dear David,

I’m happy to write to you. Now I’ll tell you something about myself. I like watching action film. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. Because he joined humor and exciting action together. I like buying books and CDs about him , but my parents think it is a waste of money.

I’m hard-working. I never mind doing extra work for our class.

I like animals. I know many animals are disappearing quickly at present. I think animals are our friends. We should protect them.

Now I have some problems with my study. I can’t achieve a balance between my study and play. And my parents only care about marks. I don’t know how to deal with them. Can you give me some suggestions? Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes.

Andy

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，给自己的笔友David写一封电子邮件，介绍自己的情况，并请他给自己提一些建议。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m happy to ...； Because he...； Because he...及 I think.... 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达期盼收到David早日来信的意愿。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了写信的目的，接下来介绍自己的喜好和问题，最后希望早日收到David的回信。此处tell sb about sth, like doing sth, I have some problems with sth, look forward to doing sth等这些词组的运用和复合句I know many animals are disappearing quickly at present.及I think animals are our friends.的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。