Question

假设你叫王圆，你现在是一名九年级学生,你现在遇到了一个困难，不知如何解决，你要写信告诉刘老师，他是你们学校的青少年工作者，你希望他给你提供一些建议。字数在70词左右。信的要点如下：
你有很多兴趣爱好，但你经常很忙，找不到足够的时间来做想做的事。
你不能在学习和兴趣爱好两方面获得平衡。
3. 所以你感到很有压力，压力的来源有：
①老师给你的压力：家庭作业
②父母给你的压力：对你要求严格，想你得高分。
③自己给自己的压力是……（如：想要成为班上最优秀的学生）
4. 你想通过多穿白色的衣服来减少压力，但不是非常有用。
5. 你希望刘老师尽快回信，给你提供意见和帮助。
参考词汇：压力pressure
Dear Mr Liu,
I am a Grade 9 student. I have a problem, but I don’t know
Yours sincerely
Wang Yuan

Answer 1

Dear Teacher Liu,
My name is WangYuan,and I am a stuent in JuRong No.2 Middle Schoool.I have some problems,and I hope you can help me. I have many hobbies,but I am always busy,I can't find any enough time to do the things what I want to do.I know that it's important to have balance in studying and do the things what I like to do. But I have a lot of homework to do every day. And my parents are strick with me in study because they want me to get good marks. I also want to be a top student in our class. So I feel great pressure.
I want to wear white clothes to make my pressure be less,but it's not very useful. Can you help me?
Yours, WangYuan

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。这种作文主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力。
【亮点说明】这篇短文写作中注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I can't find any enough time to do the things what I want to do，do the things what I like to do，because,and ,so 等等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。