Question

20．中共十八届五中全会提出一对夫妇可生育两个孩子政策后，全社会展开了热烈的讨论，某校也就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行了一次问卷调查，请你根据此结果写一份调查报告，并适当阐述你的观点，问卷调查结果如图所示：

注意：1．全文字数90词左右；
2．条理清楚，书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确；
3．短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名，文章开头已给出，不计入单词总数．
Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or asister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．．

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分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是某校就"是否想要个弟弟或妹妹"对部分学生进行的一次问卷调查，写一份调查报告，并适当阐述你的观点．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果；40%支持：不再孤独，彼此帮助，分享喜忧．60%反对：担心父母的爱，打扰学习…
2．你的观点
常用到的重点短语：
get used to 习惯于
what's more 再者
after all 毕竟
as…as 一样…
【高分句型】
1．Besides，they're afraid①that the new baby will be②so noisy that it may bother their study．
①that引导的宾语从句．
②so…that如此…以致于…，that引导的结果状语从句．
2．In my opinion，①it's hard to say ②whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．
①it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②say后面是whether 引导的宾语从句．
3．①After all，they're the persons ②who will make the final decision．
①after all 毕竟，做插入语．
②who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词presons，who作为从句的主语．

解答 Recently，a survey has been made in our school on whether you want a little brother or sister．The opinions are different．
About forty percent students think it's good to have a brother or a sister．They can help each other and share the happiness and sadness togther．And they won't feel lonely anymore．What's more，they think they'll get more freedom．（40%支持：不再孤独，彼此帮助，分享喜忧）
But others disagree．They think they won't get used to the change．They also worry that their parents won't love them as much as before．Besides，they're afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study．【高分句型】（60%反对：担心父母的爱，打扰学习…）
In my opinion，it's hard to say whether it's good or bad to have a brother or sister．【高分句型】But we should respect our parents'choices．After all，they're the persons who will make the final decision．【高分句型】（我的观点）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．