Question

18．根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约 80 词的短文．要求完整叙述图画内容．
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．As a result he got drunk．
After the meal，his friends tried to persude him not to drive home，but he didn't listen to them，saying No problem and insisted on doing so．
He got into the car and drove away．A few minuties later，he was winding his way in the street．And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree．He was badly injured but still alive．The police came to the scene，and he was taken to hospital．
He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据所给图画讲述一个醉酒开车的故事，时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；我的叔叔被邀请去吃饭，喝醉了酒，执意要开车回家，车子撞树上了，受伤住院，被罚款驾照吊销

 
常用到的重点短语：
try to do sth 尽力做某事
persude sb to do sth 劝某人做某事
insist on doing sth 坚持做某事
because of 因为

【高分句型】
1．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
2．He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．
because of 因为，of是介词，后加名词，代词或动名词．
3．He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked
was fined和was revoked是一般过去时的被动语态was/were+过去分词．

解答 Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends．He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers．【高分句型】As a result he got drunk．（第一幅图）
After the meal，his friends tried to persude him not to drive home，but he didn't listen to them，saying No problem and insisted on doing so．（第二幅图）
He got into the car and drove away．A few minuties later，he was winding his way in the street．And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree．（第三幅图）He was badly injured but still alive．The police came to the scene，and he was taken to hospital．
He had to stay in hospital for a few days beacause of being seriously hurt．【高分句型】He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked．【高分句型】（第四幅图）

点评 这是一篇看图作文．看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节． （2）结合提示词，明确考查意图．所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料．有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了． （3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯． （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用．（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等．
这篇短文能把握故事情节，能正确的运用过去时态．合理的利用连词，如As a result，After the meal，but，A few minuties later，And suddenly等，这使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理．