Question

书面表达（本大题共5分）

假如去年暑假，你和你父母去杭州旅游。请根据以下要点， 以Our trip to Hangzhou 为题写一篇80字左右的短文，介绍那次旅游。 要求：第五点用1-2句话进行切合主题的发挥。

去年暑假，我和父母自驾去杭州旅游，行程约四个小时。

杭州是我国最美丽的城市之一，有许多名胜。

我们参观了西湖（the West Lake），玩得很快乐。

我们品尝了美食，了解了不同的文化。

我们很累，但很开心。我希望……

Our trip to Hangzhou

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Answer 1

Last summer holiday, I went on a trip to Hangzhou with my parents by car. The trip took us about 4 hours. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. There are many places of interest. We visited the West Lake and had great fun. We tasted delicious food and learned about different cultures. We were tired, but we were happy. I hope I can visit it again.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，主要描述你和你父母去杭州旅游的情况。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要用过去时态。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: one of the most beautiful cities, learned about ，We were tired, but we were happy.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：提纲作文。