Question

书面表达（12分）

Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议。请了解她的烦恼并写出你（Chen Lin—from Zibo）的建议，要求字数在100词左右，建议的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。

建议应包括：（1）孩子应尊重父母（2）父母经验丰富（3）父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的（4）…… （5）多同父母交流沟通。

Possible new words: respect v. & n. 尊重; responsible adj. 有责任感的; demand v. & n. 要求

Here are Emily's problems on the Blog:

My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(l唠叨) how I should keep my room clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night! None of my friends have got such terrible parents.

What should I do?

Emily，USA

Answer 1

One possible version：

Hi, Emily,

I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents. You should understand and respect them, and do what they ask you to do. They have richer experience and better advice for young people. As your parents, they surely hope you become an excellent person. Their demands are helpful for your growing up.

Every member should be responsible and do something for the family. So you should do what you can do, such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up. Remember: Learning by doing. You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes. Teenagers should look like teenagers. Anyway, if you have any problems, just talk with your parents.

Chen Lin, Zibo

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求认真阅读Emily的博客，了解她的烦恼， 针对这些烦恼写出你的建议。首先，审题时，应适当地进行谋篇布局。根据要求可分为两部分进行写作：1. 你应该为有这样的父母而感到幸运，你应该理解他们并尊重他们。2. 每个成员都应该有责任感，为家庭做一些事。然后，应利用规范的语言，流畅的语句，适当增加细节，对存在问题及采用办法进行详细描述。最后简单总结。另外，还应尽可能地使用一些固定句型及短语，以提高文章的得分等级。

【亮点说明】本文行文流畅，语言规范。还使用了一些固定句型及短语，为文章增色不少。如I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents.等等。

考点：话题作文。