分析 这是一篇图画作文.内容是描述今年小明和小玲为妈妈过母亲节的情景并简明陈述你认为哪种方式更恰当.时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时.人称主要为第一、三人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.描述图画;小明:找父亲要钱给妈妈买了鲜花;小玲:用心画了一幅画写上"妈妈,我爱你"送给妈妈
2.陈述你认为哪种方式更恰当;
常用到的重点短语:
ask sb for sth找某人要某物
decide to do sth 决定做某事
instead of 代替,而不是
agree with 赞同
the same as 与…一样
【高分句型】
1.He hoped①his mother would feel satisfied②when she saw them after a tiring working day.
①①hope后是省略了that的宾语从句.
②when引导的时间状语从句.
2.Her mother got really moved when she received it.
when引导的时间状语从句.
3.As an old saying goes,"It is the thought that counts."
正如一句谚语所说:"心意最重要",谚语的使用.
解答 As Mother's Day was getting close,many children were thinking about what gift to get for their mothers,and so were Xiao Ming and Xiao Ling.
Xiao Ming asked his father for one hundred yuan and went to the flower shop for some nice flowers.He hoped his mother would feel satisfied when she saw them after a tiring working day.【高分句型】(小明为妈妈过母亲节)But differently thinking from Xiao Ming,Xiao Ling decided to do something meaningful instead of buying a usual gift.In the end she painted a nice picture by heart and wrote the following words on it:I LOVE YOU,MOM!Her mother got really moved when she received it.【高分句型】(小玲为妈妈过母亲节)(描述图画)
As an old saying goes,"It is the thought that counts."【高分句型】So I do agree with Xiao Ling,and I think I'd do the same as her next Mother's Day.(认为小玲的方式恰当)
点评 这是一篇看图作文.看图作文要注意一下几点(1)弄清图画内容,把握情节线索,根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事,注意图画中的细节. (2)结合提示词,明确考查意图.所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容,也是组成句子的必用材料.有时还会给出起始句(这就给出了时态),学生运用正确的时态,运用所给或所学的词语,尽量运用熟悉的句型,作适当展开,联想,就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了. (3)切忌堆砌词语,句子,注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅,连贯. (4)注意书写的规范:大小写,标点符号等的正确运用.(5)注意检查:单词拼写,语法,动词时态,语序,主谓一致等.
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