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3．最近，学校校园网的英语论坛上，正在进行以"健康生活"为话题的大讨论．下面是学生们在讨论中提到的两个实际问题．请你任选其一，从健康生活的角度谈谈你的想法．

内容提示如下：
（1）Whatdo you think of the problem？
（2）What'syour advice？
要求：
（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
（3）词数在80词左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画中提到的两个实际问题．请你任选其一，从健康生活的角度谈谈你的想法，时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．描述图画；睡眠问题和体重增加问题
2．你的看法
3．你的建议
 
常用到的重点短语：
because of 因为
have difficulty in 在某方面有困难
make sb+adj 让某人怎样
had better do sth 最好做某事
try to do sth 尽力做某事

【高分句型】
1．①As we all know，②because of the pressure of heavy schoolwork，many of us don't get ③as much sleep as we should do．
①As we all know正如我们所知道的
②because of 因为，of是介词，后接名词代词或动名词．
③as…as 表示与…一样．
2．①If you're worried about it，②you'd better ask your teacher，your friends or your parents for help．
①if引导的条件状语从句．be worried about 担心…
②had better do sth 最好做某事，ask sb for help 寻求某人的帮助
3．Get a good sleep tonight，and you'll be at your best tomorrow．
祈使句+and+陈述句，在这里祈使句相当于if 引导的条件状语从句（但此时去掉and）

解答 As we all know，because of the pressure of heavy schoolwork，many of us don't get as much sleep as we should do．【高分句型】And some of us even have difficulty in sleeping．（睡眠问题）This can make us nervous and slower at school．（我的看法）
In my opinion，we should take schoolwork in a relaxed way．If you're worried about it，you'd better ask your teacher，your friends or your parents for help．【高分句型】You may try to make a proper bedtime or get a book to read before sleep．Besides，doing some sports can also do good to you．（建议）
Get a good sleep tonight，and you'll be at your best tomorrow．【高分句型】

点评 这是一篇图画作文．本文所给图画意思表达明确，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真领会图画内涵，概括要点，并适当发挥．写作中要注意人称、时态语的搭配及主谓一致问题．同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．