Question

书面表达（本题10分）

假设你是Bob，你的英文老师让你们写一篇关于你未来工作的文章，内容要求：

你长大后想做什么职业。

你为什么喜欢这份职业。

你如何去实现它。

你觉得你的未来的职业怎么样？

字数要求70---80

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job? My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. Because first I can help many patients. It’s a hard job ，but I don’t mind it. I can find some joy in this job. Second I think I can also help myself and my family If I can become a doctor in the future so I like my job.Third I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to bea doctor. Besides ,I can meet different people in my job every day and I can learn somethingfrom them. And I would like to study hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor. I believe I can be a good doctor.

【解析】

试题分析：小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor .I would like to study hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor等，Because等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。