Question

书面表达。

李雷和他的同学要到圆山去春游。因为春天是爬山的最好时候。天气好，即不会太冷也不会太热。李雷和他的同学骑自行车去圆山，结果在路上，李雷拐错了弯，发生了交通事故，伤到了右腿。所以说遵守交通规则对于我们来说非常重要。 我们平时必须遵守 交通规则。 1. 注意交通灯。红灯停,绿灯行。  2.不要骑得太快，应该靠右边行。3. 骑车要小心，戴头盔。 4. 不能违反交通规则， 否则会被罚款。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to obey the traffice rules

Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip.

Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine. It’s not too cold and not too hot. Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffice accident happened. Li Lei’right leg was hurt.( His classmates had to send him to the hospital.) So it’s very important for us to obey the traffice rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third,we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffice rules, we’ll get a fine.

【解析】

试题分析：本文首先对李雷和他的同学选择春季去旅游的事情进行讲述，说明春季旅游的好处。然后，对李雷由于忽视了交通规则，拐错了弯而伤到了右腿的事进行叙述。最后，从四个方面说明遵守交通规则的重要性，在四个方面的叙述中注意逻辑上的条理性，可以利用First, Second, Third, Fourth来增强文章的可读性。

考点：提纲类写作

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