Question

书面表达（本题有1小题，满分15分）

根据所给提示,写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的假期之旅。

假如你是Mary，刚结束暑假旅游回到学校，请你讲述一下你的假期之旅。提示：

暑假里乘飞机和父母去北京旅行。

第一天，去了故宫拍了许多照片。

第二天，去了长城看到许多旅客并了解许多关于长城的知识。

最后去了王府井购物，买了许多纪念品。

谈谈这次旅行的感想。

Answer 1

Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our summer holiday. We took the plane there. It’s a fast and comfortable journey。We went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and we took a lot of photos there.

On the second day of our trip, we went to see the Great Wall. It was a famous view in the world. It was very great; we saw a lot of tourists. We listened to the tour guide, and knew a lot about it.

At last we went shopping in the city center of Beijing---Wangfujing Street. We bought a lot of souvenirs.

We enjoyed our trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文。记叙自己的一次旅行，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。 On the second day of our trip；It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.等这些句子运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。