Question

书面表达(15分)

请你根据以下问题提示写一篇短文, 介绍一种濒危动物——熊猫的情况。词数70个左右。

1. Where do they live?

2. What do they feed on?

3. How many pandas are there in the wild now

4. Why are they in danger? What is the situation of them?

5. What is the government doing to protect them?

6. What should we do?

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Answer 1

Pandas live in the south-west of China .They feed on bamboo. There are only just over 1600 pandas in the wild now.The number of pandas is getting smaller and smaller. Many hunters kill them for their fur and farmers change the nature reserves to make more farmlands. I think pandas need our help.The Chinese government have done something to protect animals. Encouraging hunters and farmers to leave reserves is the most important. Though I'm still a student, I can write to newspapers and magazines about protecting animals. I hope animals can live a happy life.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文主要告诉我们：大熊猫是濒危动物。大熊猫的数量因为各种原因，数量越来越少，所以希望大家保护大熊猫。短文要根据所给提示，写一篇词数在70个左右，文意连贯，表达流畅的短文。根据内容可知这里句子的时态用一般现在时，要注意上下文的衔接。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者能根据要求，描写了大熊猫生存的地点、饮食、现存的数量等。由于野生界大熊猫数量的越来越少，政府采取了措施，保护大熊猫。然后，作者又联系到自己，作为一个中学生，应该怎么做，把文章推向高潮。最后，作者表明自己的态度：希望大熊猫过上幸福快乐的生活。

考点：科普环保类作文。