Question

9．你校外籍教师John正在准备一个英美文化讲座，他发电子邮件询问你们最喜欢的话题．请你用英语写一封回信，内容要求：
一、对John平时的授课表示喜爱，赞扬他课堂的优点．
二、推荐你最喜欢的话题，如音乐、教育、体育等（不少于两项），并简要说明推荐原因．
三、表示对讲座的期待．
四、注意：1．字数：l20-150    2．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear John，
I am very happy to hear that you will have a lecture on Western Culture…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think what you have done is totally right，after all，some students can just learn something by this way
高分句型二：
You know no matter who you are and where you are，you all need to discuss about this，the more，the better
句型一  what you have done is totally right 该句是一个由what引导的宾语从句，what在句中充当宾语．
句型二 no matter who you are and where you are该句是一个no matter who 引导的让步状语从句

解答 Dear John，
   I have received with many thanks your email right now，actually，I also have some words to talk with you．
   Firstly，I love your way of teaching，you are humorous when you want us to remember some sentences or words，and it works，I have learnt so much from your class．Of course，sometimes，you are a little bit strict if some classmates don't finish there homework．I think what you have done is totally right，after all，some students can just learn something by this way．（高分句型一）
   Secondly，as you asked what's my favourite topic？I'd like to tell you，I love music，because I enjoy listening to all kinds of music．Besides，I also love the topic of education．You know no matter who you are and where you are，you all need to discuss about this，the more，the better，（高分句型二）
   Finally，I know that you are preparing a Institute about the English and American Culture，I'm very interested and expect this day will come as soon as possible．
Your secerelly
Jack

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