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6．假设你是李明，最近收到朋友张华的电子邮件，他提到高考考生将必须参加体育测试，测试成绩作为高校录取依据．由于他平时很少参加体育活动，有点担心体育成绩会影响到高考．请你根据以下要点给张华写一封电子邮件：
1．表明自己对体育测试进高考的看法；
2．安慰张华；
3．提出至少两条应对高考体育测试的建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
3．书写须清晰、工整．
Dear Zhang Hua，
I have received your e-mail telling me that sports test will be included in the college entrance examination （CEE）．I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）This will help us realize the importance of physical exercises and keep healthy．
Don't worry about this test．Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二）First，you should insist on having PE classes．Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）In addition，make the best of the break to go out of class and relax yourself．And be sure to have sports for one hour a day．
I believe you can make it!
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李明，最近收到朋友张华的电子邮件，他提到高考考生将必须参加体育测试，测试成绩作为高校录取依据．由于他平时很少参加体育活动，有点担心体育成绩会影响到高考．请你根据以下要点给张华写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：表明自己对体育测试进高考的看法；安慰张华；提出至少两条应对高考体育测试的建议．
2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：worry about 担心；take exercises做运动；insist on 坚持；join in参加；In addition另外；make the best of充分利用；make it成功；
 I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）
Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二）
Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
      I have received your e-mail telling me that sports test will be included in the college entrance examination （CEE）． I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）This will help us realize the importance of physical exercises and keep healthy．
      Don't worry about this test．Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二） First，you should insist on having PE classes．Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）In addition，make the best of the break to go out of class and relax yourself．And be sure to have sports for one hour a day．
      I believe you can make it!
                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                     Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．