Question

6．假如你是李华，你班将召开以"How to be a good student''为主题的英语班会．请你根据下图提示，写一篇发言稿．
注意：
1．文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3．词数：100左右．

Dear classmates，
I am glad to share with you my ideas about how to be a good student．
                                                                            
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息以"How to be a good student''为主题的英语班会．请你根据下图提示，写一篇发言稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从用心读书、善良做人、快乐生活和健康成长几个方面来讨论该话题 2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：From my point of view以我的观点来看；First of all首先；not only，but also 不仅，而且；focus on 专注于；In the meantime同时；do a lot of good to对…有好处；Besides另外；take an active part in积极参加；
From my point of view，a good student should be mentally and physically healthy．（高分句型一）
Besides，it's quite necessary for me to take an active part in various outdoor activities to build up my body．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear classmates，
     I am glad to share with you my ideas about how to be a good student．
     From my point of view，a good student should be mentally and physically healthy．（高分句型一）
     First of all，I should be kind，not only to my family，but also to all the people I meet．To be kind alone is not enough．As a student，I ought to focus on my learning-my first important task．I will do my best to be an independent and cooperative learner．
     In the meantime，to live happily every day is equally important．Enjoying life to the fullest will benefit me greatly．Being happy will do a lot of good to me and those around me．Besides，it's quite necessary for me to take an active part in various outdoor activities to build up my body．（高分句型二）
     Let's spare no effort to perfect ourselves and get ready for our future life．
     That's all．Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．