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3．假设你是安阳市第三十六中学学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信表示感兴趣．
说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 （曾在学校广播站当记者）并希望得到回复
注意：1．词数：100左右   2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old boy，presently attending Anyang No.36 Senior High School．Having read your ad．for a few part-time English reporters in the newspaper，I feel I'm fit for the job，so I'm writing to apply for it．
As a student，I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fiel ds．Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．So I think I'm the very person you are looking for．I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position．
I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你是安阳市第三十六中学学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，你要给给报社写一封自荐信表示感兴趣．因此，你需要说明你的知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 （曾在学校广播站当记者）并希望得到回复．
文章基本要点已经给出，但在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
1．文章是要给报社写一封自荐信表示自己对兼职记者这份工作感兴趣，所以主体时态要用一般现在时．
2．要点要齐全．但不要对要点进行简单的罗列．可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文衔接的自然流畅．
3．在介绍自己时，要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，细节把控要到位，否则会显得内容不够丰满．
4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【范文亮点】
优秀词汇和短语：consideration考虑；apply for申请；I'd appreciate it if…如果…我将不胜感激；look forward to期待…
优秀句式和行文脉络：
1．高分句型一："Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing．"使用了"Not only…but also…不但…而且…"．
2．高分句型二："I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．"，使用了句型：I'd appreciate it if…如果…我将不胜感激．
3．文章采用了"Not only…but also…、In addition、Above all"等连词，使行文更加流畅．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，an 18-year-old boy，presently attending Anyang No.36 Senior High School．Having read your ad．for a few part-time English reporters in the newspaper，I feel I'm fit for the job，so I'm writing to apply for it．
As a student，I've read a lot and have much knowledge in many fiel ds．Not only do I have a good knowledge of English but also I do well in both speaking and writing（高分句型一）．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．So I think I'm the very person you are looking for．I'm sure I can do the job well if I get the position．
I'd appreciate it if you could take me into consideration．I'm looking forward to your reply（高分句型二）．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．