分析 本文是一篇记叙文,主题是"十年后的我".在写作时要注意从家庭、工作和业余生活三方面要点着手,因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容.比如可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等.在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词,插入语以使文章层次分明,使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等.此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时.
(高分句型一) I often imagine what my life would be like in the future.
what…引导一个宾语从句,放在动词imagine后,意思是想象未来生活是什么样子.
(高分句型二)I'will do a good job in whatever I do
whatever i do放在in后面,引导一个宾语从句;
(高分句型三)In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
句子里使用两个形容词的比较级much richer and more colorful,加强语气的作用.
解答 (高分句型一) I often imagine what my life would be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.i will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.(高分句型二)I'will do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I will continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I will travel around the world.(高分句型三)In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.
点评 本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务.在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活.在文中作者用到了短语In my free time,In a word,such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一.此外,还用到了宾语从句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点.
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