Question

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

写作要点： 1.表明自己的看法；

2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；

3.提出至少两条建议

要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 4.书写需清晰、工整。

Hi, TigerMom，

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is

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Answer 1

Hi，TigerMom，

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude school never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A student in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make takes of her own as we teenagers often do.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语turned out证明是；by no means决不；More importantly,更重要的是；Some all-A student in school have turned out not to be successful in society as they were expected.这个句子as引导方式状语从句；The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities这个句子that引导的是表语从句；So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice这个句子suggest引导宾语从句，should do sth 其中should可以省略；

考点： 提纲类作文