假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．修改:在错的词的下面划一横线.并在该词下面写出改正后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

精英家教网 > 高中英语 > 题目详情

5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks．
Unluckily，all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale．They were quick sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine．They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety．I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem．

分析本文主要讲述作者身边发生的事情，几个同学吃零食中毒，幸亏救治及时才脱离危险，作者强烈建议全社会关注食品安全．

解答 I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to enjoy∧snacks．
Unluckily，all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale．They were quick sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine．They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine．This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety．I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem．
详解：
1．to改为with 考查介词．share with意为"把（自己的感受）告诉（某人）"，是固定搭配．
2．classmate改为classmates 考查名词复数．one of后面接可数名词的复数．
3．加the 考查冠词．"snacks"第二次出现并且是特指．因在第二个"snacks"前加上the．
4．our改为their 考查代词．前半句是说他们中了毒，当然后半句是他们的脸变白了．
5．quick改为quikcly 考查副词．send是动词，要用副词修饰．形容词quick的副词是quikcly．
6．examine改为examined 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是已发生的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．dangerours改为danger 考查名词．out of是介词短语，后接名词，形容词dangerours的名词是danger．
8．before改为after 考查连词．根据句意在吃完药后他们都脱离了危险．因此把before改为after．
9．去掉to 考查词语用法．make sb do sth．意为"使某人做某事"，即接不带to的动词不定式．
10．pays改为pay 考查虚拟语气．主句的谓语是suggest，后接宾语从句时从句的谓语用虚拟语气：should do，should可以省略．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

练习册系列答案

年级	高中课程	年级	初中课程
高一	高一免费课程推荐！	初一	初一免费课程推荐！
高二	高二免费课程推荐！	初二	初二免费课程推荐！
高三	高三免费课程推荐！	初三	初三免费课程推荐！
更多初中、高中辅导课程推荐,点击进入>>

相关习题

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：完形填空

14．I grew up poor-living with six brothers，three sisters and my mother．We had little money，but plenty of love and （41）A．I was happy and energetic．I understood that no matter how poor a person was，he could still （42）Da dream．
My dream was （43）A．By the time I was sixteen，I could throw a ninety-mile-per-hour baseball and （44）C anything that moved on the field．I was also （45）C：my high school coach was John，who not only （46）A me，but also taught me how to believe in myself．He （47）B me the difference between having a dream and showing conviction （信念）．One particular incident with coach John changed my life forever．
A friend （48）D me for a summer job．This meant a chance for money in my pocket-money for a new bike，new clothes and the （49）Cof savings for a house for my mother．Then I realized I would have to （50）C summer baseball to handle the work schedule，and that meant I would have to tell John I wouldn't be playing．
When I told John，he was as （51）B as I expected．"You have your whole life to work，"he said，"Your （52）C days are limited．You can't afford to waste them．"I stood before him with my head（53）B，trying to think of the words that would（54）D to him why my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was worth facing his （55）D in me．
"Well，"he asked，"is 3.5an hour the（56）B of a dream？"
That simple question made （57）A to me the difference between wanting something right now and having a（58）A．I devoted myself to sports that summer．I was chosen by the Pittsburgh Pirates to play baseball within that year．At the same time，I was（59）Da 20，000contract（合同）．Later，I bought my mother the （60）C of my dream!

41．A．attention	B．time	C．patience	D．fashion
42．A．bring	B．continue	C．make	D．afford
43．A．athletics	B．music	C．business	D．money
44．A．kick	B．play	C．hit	D．pass
45．A．right	B．popular	C．lucky	D．confident
46．A．believed in	B．relied on	C．called on	D．dealt with
47．A．gave	B．taught	C．brought	D．asked
48．A．called	B．advised	C．applied	D．recommended
49．A．aim	B．idea	C．start	D．purpose
50．A．give in	B．give away	C．give up	D．give off
51．A．happy	B．mad	C．frightened	D．excited
52．A．living	B．working	C．playing	D．dreaming
53．A．moving	B．hanging	C．shaking	D．nodding
54．A．express	B．announce	C．apologize	D．explain
55．A．belief	B．pride	C．fear	D．disappointment
56．A．length	B．price	C．power	D．spirit
57．A．clear	B．direct	C．straight	D．attractive
58．A．goal	B．thought	C．mind	D．design
59．A．found	B．paid	C．presented	D．offered
60．A．watch	B．car	C．house	D．book．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：信息匹配

16．Your smart phone may have hurt you before you realize it．Don't be addicted to it．Put your phone away，OK？
1．Cyber Sickness
Also called"digital motion sickness"，symptoms that range from headaches to woozy feelings can occur when you quickly scroll on your smart phone or watch action packed video on your screen．（56）B．Your sense of balance is different from other senses in that it has lots of inputs．When those inputs don't agree，that's when you feel dizziness and sickness．
2．Text Claw
It is the unofficial term for soreness and muscle contraction felt in the finger，wrist and forearm after heavy smart phone use．（57）F．So if you're always on your phone，it makes sense to feel discomfort in your hands and forearms．
3．Eye Strain
Do you stare at a screen for hours on end？If you're reading this，you very well might．（58）G．Staring at your digital devices for a long time can lead to dry eyes，headaches and tiredness，which can decrease your productivity．Experts suggest taking screen breaks every 20minutes．
4．Text Neck
Similar to the claw，text neck---discomfort in the neck and spine happens when you spend a long time looking down at your smart phone．（59）DBeing mindful of how far your neck bends when you're on your phone----and bending it back to an upright position can help reduce the risk of text neck．
5．Pedestrian safety
Pedestrian deaths are on the rise because too many smart phone users engage in distracted walking．While focused on the cyber world，many of us can lose reality of the physical one．Elemental pedestrian safety knowledge is compromised by technology，and the risks are scary．（60）E

A．We should taking breaks for a while．
B．The sensation results from a mismatch between sensory inputs．
C．Remember that pedestrian safety is more important than smart phone．
D．The habit may lead to people requiring medical spine care at a younger age．
E．To avoid injury or worse，put your phone away until you've reached a safe spot．
F．Any specific motor activity can cause pain in the tendons （筋） and muscles when done repeatedly．
G．Any activity that requires active use of your eyes---driving and reading included---can cause eye tiredness．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：书面表达

13．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友彼得希望成为2022年北京-张家口冬奥会的志愿者．他向你写信询问相关情况，并求助怎样学好汉语．请给他回信，要点如下：
1．收到来信，获悉求助；
2．冬奥盛会带给举办地很多影响（具体说明）；
3．学好汉语的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
参考词汇：志愿者volunteer 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiakou Olympic Winter Games
Dear Peter，

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：填空题

20．Don't makeexcuses（理由） for your being late．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：阅读理解

10．A camera，a glove，a hand tool，even a toothbrush…they are all up there，above the clouds，going around and around the Earth．There are also thousands of pieces of metal and plastic．Some of them are only about the size of a fingernail．Many are much larger．Scientists consider all these objects to be space junk，and they are a problem．
Since people first launched rockets into space in the 1950s，we have been leaving behind all sorts of things．Much of the space junk is made up of little pieces of things that were once bigger objects，until they struck each other and broke apart．Sometimes larger pieces survive the extreme heat through the atmosphere and hit the ground or the ocean at great speeds．
But space junk falling on housetops is not the biggest worry．Scientists are concerned about the Kessler syndrome （综合征）．It is named after the American scientist who first thought of the idea in 1978．Imagine what happens when an empty rocket strikes another while orbiting （环绕轨道运行） the Earth．Two big things become many smaller things．They then hit other things．The pieces get smaller and smaller until they form a cloud of junk that blocks the path of future space vehicles．
Marco Castronuovo，an Italian Space Agency researcher，suggested launching a satellite into space that would get very close to some of the larger pieces of space junk．The satellite would connect a small rocket to the useless object．When the rocket explodes，it pushes the junk into a lower and slower orbit，nearer the Earth．After a time，the junk burns up in the atmosphere．
Scientists have been concerned about space junk for many years．Right now，the costs of the clean-up have been too great．Mr．Castronuovo says his system could be put in place for a much more reasonable amount of money．

27．What does the underlined part"space junk"in Paragraph 1refer to？D
A．It refers to small pieces of things that were once bigger objects．
B．It refers to objects that survived the extreme heat through the atmosphere．
C．It refers to clouds that are made up of small objects in space．
D．It refers to all kinds of objects that have been left behind in space．
28．Which of the following statements is TRUE？C
A．Scientists consider all the objects in space as space junk．
B．Space junk will never fall on our housetops．
C．Kessler was the first scientist who came up with the idea of space junk syndrome．
D．The cost of the clean-up with Marco Castronuovo's method has been too great．
29．What is mainly talked about in the passage？C
A．Smaller objects come together to form clouds of space junk．
B．Human beings are responsible for space junk．
C．Space junk is a big problem human beings have to find ways to solve．
D．An Italian researcher has found a good way to remove space junk．
30．What is the author's attitude towards Mr．Castronuovo's method of cleaning up space junk？B
A．Doubtful．B．Objective．（客观的） C．Supportive D．Disagreeing．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：阅读理解

17．My father and I were very close．I loved pleasing him，and he was always proud of my success．If I won a spelling contest at school，he was on top of the world．Later in life whenever I got a promotion （提升），I'd call my father right away and he'd rush out to tell all his friends．In 1970，when I was named President of the Ford Motor Company，I didn't know which of us was more excited．Like many native Locations，my parents were very open with their feelings and their love----not only at home，but also in public．Most of my friends would never hug their fathers．But I hugged and kissed my dad at every opportunity----nothing could have felt more natural．
He was a curious man who was always trying new things．He was the first person in Allentown to buy a motorcycle．Unfortunately，my father and his motorcycle didn't get along too well．He fell off it so often that he got rid of it just a month after buying it．As a result，he never again trusted any vehicle （车辆） with less than four wheels．Because of that motorcycle，I wasn't allowed to have a bicycle when I was growing up．Whenever I wanted to ride a bike，I had to borrow one from a friend．On the other hand，my father let me drive a car as soon as I turned sixteen．

32．When I won a contest at school，my father wouldB．
A．tell all his friends about it
B．feel most happy over it
C．get very surprised at it
D．be much more excited than I
33．Which of the following statements shows that my father was a curious man？B
A．He was always proud of my success．
B．He was the first person in town to buy a motorcycle．
C．He was very open with his feelings and his love．
D．He let me drive a car as soon as I turned sixteen．
34．My father trusted no vehicle with less than four wheels becauseD．
A．he did not like the way I always borrowed bicycles from friends
B．he thought that cars were faster than motorcycles
C．he liked every new model made by the Ford Motor company
D．he had trouble in riding his motorcycle
35．Which of the following statements is NOT true？A
A．My father was the only person in Allentown to buy a motorcycle．
B．I was not allowed to have a bicycle when I was growing up．
C．I made use of every chance to hug and kiss my dad when was young．
D．My father bought a motorcycle but got rid of it because he fell off it so often．

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：选择题

14．_______ himself with routine tasks，he had no time to accompany his children．（　　）

A．

Occupied

B．

Occupying

C．

Being occupied

D．

To be occupied

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英语 来源： 题型：完形填空

15．The hospital I work in sits on a beautiful mountain．People often have to walk about 40kilometres in order to see a （21）C．This is why home-based care comes in．A doctor and several nurses travel out to （22）A sick people．Before I go out，I often buy some （23）C for the poor people we will meet as some of them might be hungry．I（24）D buy a bag of sweets for the children every time I go out．
One day，I （25）A at an orphanage（孤儿院）．Inside I saw a beautiful little girl，Tanzile．I gave her a sweet from my bag with a（n）（26）B and she asked，"Can I have another one？"I gave her another one and （27）C，"This little darling is so clever-she has taken two for （28）C"But after I asked her some questions，I was （29）D．Tanzile is 7years old．Two years ago，both of her parents （30）A in a car accident．Her younger sister who was only three then was taken away by a couple．Ever since then，she has （31）B to accept what people give only to her （32）Dthey give her two．
In fact，we found many things that she had been （33）Cto give to her sister one day．
I said to her，"You must （34）D it if someone gives you food or something else-even if it is only one piece （35）D two-for your own health．"It was so （36）A for me to fight back the tears as she （37）A her head．Her hope and （38）C were all that she had．They（39）B more than anything else．
I hope that Tanzile and the other beautiful children like her will （40）B with their brothers and sisters again．

21．A．result	B．parent	C．doctor	D．friend
22．A．help	B．surprise	C．encourage	D．protect
23．A．clothes	B．medicine	C．food	D．water
24．A．hardly	B．still	C．never	D．also
25．A．stopped	B．hid	C．survived	D．danced
26．A．wish	B．smile	C．plan	D．idea
27．A．guessed	B．believed	C．thought	D．imagined
28．A．myself	B．yourself	C．herself	D．themselves
29．A．interested	B．pleased	C．scared	D．surprised
30．A．died	B．tried	C．fought	D．cried
31．A．pretended	B．refused	C．hoped	D．dreamed
32．A．although	B．if	C．once	D．unless
33．A．developing	B．choosing	C．collecting	D．making
34．A．want	B．check	C．eat	D．accept
35．A．more than	B．together with	C．except for	D．instead of
36．A．hard	B．sorry	C．funny	D．strange
37．A．shook	B．hit	C．touched	D．pressed
38．A．honesty	B．attitude	C．love	D．humour
39．A．cared	B．mattered	C．earned	D．cost
40．A．show up	B．get together	C．get along	D．go out．

查看答案和解析>>

同步练习册答案

练习册

高中

初中

小学