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9．今年，人工智能机器人AI-MATHS参加了全国高考，这引发了人们对于高科技发展的热议，请你"High-technology around us"为题，谈谈高科技的利与弊．要求如下：
1．阐明利与弊
提示：利：生活更便利，舒适；节约时间和提高效率；帮助探索宇宙等．
弊：个人隐私和安全受到威胁；机器代替人类劳作导致失业率上升等．
2．你的看法
注意：词数100左右；
参考词汇：artificial intelligence 人工智能，advanced science and technology先进科技，privacy隐私，unemployment 失业
High-technology around usAI-MATHS，an artificial intelligence robot，took this year's national college exam known as gaokao，which has aroused much public concern on the rapid development of high-technology．（高分句型一）Undoubtedly，advanced science and technology has found its way into our everyday life．For instance，in some special work environment，artificial intelligence helps humans to get some work done，like dangerous work，work of high labor intensity，etc．（高分句型二） Not only can it reduce the burden of work，but also tends to be more efficient and time-saving．In addition，it is AI that brings our life unprecedented convenience and comfort．Even separated by thousands of miles，we can still easily communicate via high-tech．What's more，high-tech contributes a lot to further exploring our space．However，it is also a double-edged sword．While we enjoy its convenience，the problem of privacy and safety it has caused can't be overlooked．（高分句型三）Besides，it is likely to lead to certain unemployment with an increasing number of artificial intelligence robots replacing humans in some fields．
Through the above analysis，we'd better take high-tech reasonably and employ it according to the circumstances we are in．（高分句型四）Only in this way can we make the best use of it．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息今年，人工智能机器人AI-MATHS参加了全国高考，这引发了人们对于高科技发展的热议，请你"High-technology around us"为题，谈谈高科技的利与弊，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：阐明利与弊提示：利：生活更便利，舒适；节约时间和提高效率；帮助探索宇宙等．弊：个人隐私和安全受到威胁；机器代替人类劳作导致失业率上升等．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Undoubtedly毫无疑问；For instance例如；Not only，but also不仅，而且；In addition另外；What's more而且；However然而；Besides，另外；make the best use of充分利用；
AI-MATHS，an artificial intelligence robot，took this year's national college exam known as gaokao，which has aroused much public concern on the rapid development of high-technology．（高分句型一）
For instance，in some special work environment，artificial intelligence helps humans to get some work done，like dangerous work，work of high labor intensity，etc．（高分句型二）
While we enjoy its convenience，the problem of privacy and safety it has caused can't be overlooked．（高分句型三）
Through the above analysis，we'd better take high-tech reasonably and employ it according to the circumstances we are in．（高分句型四

解答 High-technology around us
       AI-MATHS，an artificial intelligence robot，took this year's national college exam known as gaokao，which has aroused much public concern on the rapid development of high-technology．（高分句型一）Undoubtedly，advanced science and technology has found its way into our everyday life．For instance，in some special work environment，artificial intelligence helps humans to get some work done，like dangerous work，work of high labor intensity，etc．（高分句型二） Not only can it reduce the burden of work，but also tends to be more efficient and time-saving．In addition，it is AI that brings our life unprecedented convenience and comfort．Even separated by thousands of miles，we can still easily communicate via high-tech．What's more，high-tech contributes a lot to further exploring our space．
       However，it is also a double-edged sword．While we enjoy its convenience，the problem of privacy and safety it has caused can't be overlooked．（高分句型三）Besides，it is likely to lead to certain unemployment with an increasing number of artificial intelligence robots replacing humans in some fields．
       Through the above analysis，we'd better take high-tech reasonably and employ it according to the circumstances we are in．（高分句型四）Only in this way can we make the best use of it．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．