Question

【题目】假定你是李明，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven向你询问如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点给他写封建议信。

要点：1.参加中文学习班； 2．看中文电视、书刊；

3．学唱中文歌； 4．交中国朋友。

注意：词数120左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Steven，

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice

Best wishes

Yours，

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Steven,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are some suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it is also helpful to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so, you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】：本文要点全部列入，写作要求达到。在列举建议时，本文恰当地选用连接词，如：first、then、besides等，使得文章更具连贯性。使用it作形式主语的句型如it is also helpful to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.使文章简洁明了，更具说服力。