Question

16．假如你是高中生李华，请根据以下要点，以日记的形式，叙述你在11月15日（周六）参加在乡下橘子采摘节（Orange-picking Festival）的活动情况．
你到达橘园的方式，时间，及当时的天气状况；
你在橘子采摘节的所见所闻．
注意：日记格式已给出；词数120左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
 
Saturday，Nov.15                                               Sunny
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们以日记的形式，叙述在11月15日（周六）参加在乡下橘子采摘节（Orange-picking Festival）的活动情况，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：到达橘园的方式，时间，及当时的天气状况；在橘子采摘节的所见所闻．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为总体介绍橘子采摘节．第二部分为在橘子采摘节的所见所闻．第三部分为感慨．
重点短语与句型：
by bus 乘公共汽车…
in red 穿红衣服的
say goodbye to 道别
enjoy  oneself  玩的开心
高分句型一：Today，a sunny day，Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival，which started at 8 o'clock in the morning．这里含有一个which引导的非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：While walking along the country road，we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing．这是现在分词walking作时间状语．

解答 Today，a sunny day，Li Hua and I went to the countryside by bus to attend the Orange-picking Festival，which started at 8 o'clock in the morning．（高分句型一）（ 总体介绍橘子采摘节）
    When the organizer announced the rules of the festival，we were led into the orange garden by beautiful girls in red，group by group．While walking along the country road，we saw the beautiful scenery and heard the birds singing（高分句型二）．The air was much fresher and cleaner than that in the city we are living in．During the festival，we enjoyed sweet oranges，watched some exciting performances and learned many stories about the town and its kind people．At about five in the afternoon，we had to say goodbye to the garden and went back home．Both Li Hua and I enjoyed ourselves and hoped to visit the again soon．（橘子采摘节的所见所闻）
What an unforgettable day!（感慨）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．