Question

12．你校英文报开展"旅游的利弊"专栏，请你根据下列提示，写一箱短文，谈谈你对旅游的看法．
内容提示：
1．放松自己；
2．开阔视野；
3．结交朋友；
4．劳累和费钱．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
When talking about travel，we may immediately think of its advantages．
Travel is a good way to relax yourself．We usually go to work every day，making us bored and tired．（高分句型一）Travel can make us forget our boring work for a little while．Besides，travel can broaden our view and make our experience rich．There are many more other advantages of travelling．We can visit many deferent places and make new friends，and just as the old saying goes，"One should read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand kilometers"．（高分句型二）
However，there are disadvantages of travel．For example，it is costly and tiring．So we'd better choose a proper form for ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你校英文报开展"旅游的利弊"专栏，请你根据下列提示，写一箱短文，谈谈你对旅游的看法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：放松自己；开阔视野；结交朋友；劳累和费钱． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：for a little while暂时；Besides另外；broaden our view拓展我们的视野；as the old saying goes俗话说；However然而；For example例如；
We usually go to work every day，making us bored and tired．（高分句型一）
We can visit many deferent places and make new friends，and just as the old saying goes，"One should read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand kilometers"．（高分句型二）

解答 When talking about travel，we may immediately think of its advantages．Travel is a good way to relax yourself．We usually go to work every day，making us bored and tired．（高分句型一）Travel can make us forget our boring work for a little while．Besides，travel can broaden our view and make our experience rich．There are many more other advantages of travelling．We can visit many deferent places and make new friends，and just as the old saying goes，"One should read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand kilometers"．（高分句型二）
      However，there are disadvantages of travel．For example，it is costly and tiring．So we'd better choose a proper form for ourselves．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．