Question

和睦的家庭有利于孩子的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息和自身的感受，以How we can build up a harmonious family 为题用英语写一篇短文。

主要特征	充满温暖、爱心和欢笑； 相互关爱、尊重和理解
主要益处	生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上； 　生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐
父母该 怎么做	言行举止上做好表率； 充分尊重、信任孩子； 经常与孩子沟通交流
你该怎么做	……

注意：

1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数120左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

How we can build up a harmonious family

A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health.

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Answer 1

How we can build up a harmonious family

A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. A harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter. Parents and children love and show concern for each other. They also respect and understand each other. If a child grows up in a harmonious family, he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic. Otherwise, he may be miserable and pessimistic. Meanwhile, parents in a harmonious family are sure to live happily and more healthily.

Since a harmonious family plays a very important role in our life, it is up to every family member to contribute to the building of such a family. First of all, parents should be a role model for their children and pay more attention to their own words and behavior. Besides, they must trust their children and often communicate with them.

As children of the family, we should also respect and understand our parents, and try to share their burdens. If we do so, our home will always be harmonious.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求以How we can build up a harmonious family为题写一篇英语短文，来谈谈家庭和睦的重要性以及怎样建立和睦的家庭。写作要点以表格的形式给出，清楚明了，可以从和睦家庭的特征、家庭和睦的好处、父母怎样做、孩子怎样做这四个方面来写。使用第一人称进行写作，时态以现在时为主，注意语法知识的正确运用。

【亮点说明】范文使用了大量的固定短语：is essential to；full of；show concern for；grows up；is likely to be； are sure to；plays a very important role in；it is up to sb to do sth；contribute to；pay more attention to；communicate with等，使作文内容显得非常充实，且有说服力；

范文注意使用Otherwise, Meanwhile, First of all, Besides等来起衔接作用，使作文条理清晰，层次分明。

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