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5．假如你是一所国际中学的学生会主席，你校将要举行为期两周的中学生夏令营（8月1日至14日），旨在增进学生对不同国家文化的了解．请你以学生会的名义拟一则通知．
内容包括：1．活动介绍；
2．报名要求（英语水平；沟通能力；…）；
3．报名时间：2017年5月10日至17日；
4．报名地点：学生会．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．通知格式已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
NOTICEOur school will hold a summer camp．It will begin on August 1st，lasting two weeks．The camp aims to help students have a better understanding of various cultures from different countries．（高分句型一）Here are some requirements．
You are expected to have a great ability to communicate with others．（高分句型二）Of course，a good command of English is absolutely an advantage．Above all，you should behave well and get along well with others．（高分句型三）
If you are interested，you can sign up for it at Students'Union from May 10 to May 17．Welcome all those who meet these requirements and are eager to take part in this program．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是一所国际中学的学生会主席，你校将要举行为期两周的中学生夏令营（8月1日至14日），旨在增进学生对不同国家文化的了解．请你以学生会的名义拟一则通知．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：活动介绍；报名要求（英语水平；沟通能力；…）；报名时间：2017年5月10日至17日；报名地点：学生会．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：communicate with沟通；a good command of精通，掌握；Above all最重要的是；get along well with相处的好；take part in 参加
The camp aims to help students have a better understanding of various cultures from different countries．（高分句型一）
You are expected to have a great ability to communicate with others．（高分句型二）
Above all，you should behave well and get along well with others．（高分句型三）

解答 NOTICE
       Our school will hold a summer camp．It will begin on August 1st，lasting two weeks．The camp aims to help students have a better understanding of various cultures from different countries．（高分句型一）Here are some requirements．
       You are expected to have a great ability to communicate with others．（高分句型二）Of course，a good command of English is absolutely an advantage．Above all，you should behave well and get along well with others．（高分句型三）
       If you are interested，you can sign up for it at Students'Union from May 10 to May 17．Welcome all those who meet these requirements and are eager to take part in this program．
                                                                                                                                                                                        The Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．