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8．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Lily来信说，她对你校最近举办的古诗词朗诵大赛（the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest）非常感兴趣．请你根据下列提示，用英语给她写一封回信，内容包括：
1．比赛的时间、地点；
2．举办活动的目的；
3．你的参赛感受．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Lily，
I'm very happy to receive your letter．
Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school，I am very pleased to tell you more details about it．（高分句型一）
The contest was held in the school gym from March 20^thto March 23rd，aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型二）So fascinating and interesting was the contest that many students entered for it．The contest included reading and reciting the ancient poetry and I took part in both．I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems，which I'meager to introduceto foreigners who also show interest in them．（高分句型三）
With best wishes．

Yours，
Li Hua
．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Lily来信说，她对你校最近举办的古诗词朗诵大赛（the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest）非常感兴趣．请你根据下列提示，用英语给她写一封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：比赛的时间、地点；举办活动的目的；你的参赛感受．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be interested in 对…感兴趣；aim to do目的是；take part in参加；be eager to do渴望做某事；
Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school，I am very pleased to tell you more details about it．（高分句型一）
The contest was held in the school gym from March 20^th to March 23rd，aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型二）
I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems，which I'm eager to introduce to foreigners who also show interest in them．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Lily，
       I am very happy to receive your letter． Knowing that you're interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest organized by our school，I am very pleased to tell you more details about it．（高分句型一）
      The contest was held in the school gym from March 20^th to March 23rd，aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture．（高分句型二）So fascinating and interesting was the contest that many students entered for it．The contest included reading and reciting the ancient poetry and I took part in both．I have had a deeper understanding about our excellent ancient poems，which I'm eager to introduce to foreigners who also show interest in them．（高分句型三）
       With best wishes．
                                                              
Yours，
                                                              Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．