分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文,根据提示信息你们班级的节目"哈姆雷特(Hamlet)"将参加下个月学校"英语文化节"话剧drama比赛,你给度假中的外教Mr.Hurst写一封电子邮件,并附上节目录像,请他给予你相关的指导,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,2、要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:on behalf of代表;Recently 最近,近来;make proper adjustments 作出调整;despite不管,不顾;
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month,which is an important event in our school's English Cultural Festival.(高分句型一)
I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion on our costumes,acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.(高分句型二)
解答 Dear Mr.Hurst,
I am sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation.I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month,which is an important event in our school's English Cultural Festival.(高分句型一)With the attached video of our rehearsal,I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance.I would also appreciate it if you could share your valued opinion on our costumes,acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.(高分句型二)
Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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