Question

4．假定你是李华，你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结（Chinese knot），但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins，说明相关情况．
注意：
1．词数100 左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）
The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）But don't worry，I've asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead．She is good at making Chinese knots．Then she will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning．
Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）Wish you a good time!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结（Chinese knot），但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins，说明相关情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：2、要在恰当的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be able to能够做某事；express my apology for表达歉意；be good at 擅长；
 I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）
    The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）
I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ms Jenkins，
       I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）But don't worry，I've asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead．She is good at making Chinese knots．Then she will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning．
       Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）Wish you a good time!
                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．