Question

13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
This summer，I paid a visit in my hometown．What made me really sad was that it had changed a lot of．
In the past，my hometown was very beautiful，with small river run through the village．Tall and straight trees，beautiful flowers or green grass could be seen everywhere．Nowadays，therefore，with the development of modern society，people are living a"happy"life．Many tall buildings are found on both sides of the river，but the river has been bad polluted as waste water runs directly into it and there are now few fishes swim in it．It was time to take measure to protect our living environment．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者的家乡变化很大．以前是小河环绕，绿树成荫，各种鲜艳的花，翠绿的草随处可见．现在，随着城镇化的发展．小河两岸高楼林立，城镇化已经达到了非常高的水平．由于生活污水工业废水未经处理就直接排放入小河里，这样就严重污染了水域．由此可见，应该好好保护我们生活的环境了．

解答 This summer，I paid a visit in my hometown．What made me really sad was that it had changed a lot of．
In the past，my hometown was very beautiful，with∧small river run through the village．Tall and straight trees，beautiful flowers or green grass could be seen everywhere．Nowadays，therefore，with the development of modern society，people are living a"happy"life．Many tall buildings are found on both sides of the river，but the river has been bad polluted as waste water runs directly into it and there are now few fishes swim in it．It was time to take measure to protect our living environment．
详解：
1．in改为to 考查介词．pay a visit to意为"去参观，拜访"，是固定搭配．
2．去掉of 考查词语用法．change是动词，用副词a lot修饰，a lot of修饰名词．
3．加a 考查冠词．river是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
4．run改为running 考查现在分词．with复合结构中，river与run之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作宾语补足语．
5．or改为and 考查连词．beautiful flowers和green grass之间是并列关系而非选择关系，用连词and．
6．therefore改为however 考查副词．however表示转折，尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时，表示转折，其意为"可是""仍然"等．可放在句首、句中或句末，通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开．
7．bad改为badly 考查副词．pollute是动词，要用副词修饰．
8．swim改为swimming或swim前加that 考查现在分词或定语从句．fishes与swim之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语swimming in it作后置定语；或swim前加that，构成定语从句．
9．was改为is 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
10．measure改为measures 考查名词复数．take measures意为"采取措施"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．