假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As the saying goes，chances favored the prepared mind．I learned this from one of my experience．
I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school．Because of this，I decided to give up play volleyball．Luckily，my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure．After that，I practiced playing volleyball on every day．When another tryout arrived，I was full prepared and tried my best．As a result，I was selected and became an important player on our school team．
From this，I am firmly convincing that，no matter when chances arrive，we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared．

分析作者在文中以自己加入足球队的经历告诉我们：机会青睐于有准备的人．

解答 As the saying goes，chances favored the prepared mind．I learned this from one of my experience．I was not chosen as∧member of the volleyball team of our school．Because of this，I decided to give up play volleyball．Luckily，my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure．After that，I practiced playing volleyball on every day．When another tryout arrived，I was full prepared and tried my best．As a result，I was selected and became an important player on our school team．From this，I am firmly convincing that，no matter when chances arrive，we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared．
详解：
1．favored改成favor；考查动词的时态，此处是一句谚语，动词要用一般现在时．
2．experience改成experiences；考查名词的单复数，one of 后面跟名词的复数形式表示一个范围．
3．member前加a；考查冠词，member为可数名词的单数形式，在文中第一次出现，故用不定冠词a表示泛指．
4．paly改成playing；考查非谓语动词在短语give up中up为介词，后面跟动词的动名词形式．
5．but改成and；考查连词，结合上下文分析此处为并列关系，故用and．
6．which改成that；考查强调句，这里改为that，构成"It is/was+被强调部分+that从句"的强调句型．
7．on去掉；考查介词，表示时间的名词前面有this，that，every，next等修饰时，前面不加介词．
8．full改成fully；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词prepared．
9．convincing改成convinced；考查动词的语态，主语I与动词convince是动宾关系，故用过去分词形式与前面的am构成被动语态．
10．were改成are；考查动词的时态，这是一个宾语从句，主句用了一般现在时am，从句也要用一般现在时，故把were改为are．

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