Question

Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking，and 1. ________

he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen      2. ________

smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room,         3. ________

Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went         4. ________

back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed,          5. ________

he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later，Jack's mother           6. ________

smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jack's bedroom. Good heavens!   7. ________

Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got some        8. ________

water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson.“I'll give up         9. ________

smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.       10. ________

Answer 1

1. and 改为but

2. 去掉in

3. 正确

4. Heard 改为Hearing

5. back后面加to

6. smoke改为smoking

7. smell 改为smelt

8. sleep 改为asleep或sleeping

9. up 改为out

10. in 后面加a

解析:

1.后是转折关系

2.是典型的中国式英语

3. 正确

4. 用现在分词

5. back to somewhere 回到某地

6.couldn’t help doing sth “情不自禁做某事”  

7.态应该前后一致

8. 此处为表语成分。

9.put out the fire”扑灭大火

10.  “in a low voice” 低声地说