Question

20．假如你是李华，正在英国留学．你的朋友小林高中毕业后打算到英国留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐．
请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：
（1）语言是道硬门槛；
（2）适应能力很重要；
（3）兴趣爱好被看重；
（4）要有社会责任感．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Xiao Lin，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．
Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（高分句型三）
This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．

Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇应用文．也是高考常考的文体形式之一．文章给出了简单的汉语提示，成文时需要考生充分发挥想象力，使文章内容丰富．成文时应注意一下几点：1．文章内容要齐全；（1）语言是道硬门槛； 2）适应能力很重要；（3）兴趣爱好被看重；（4）要有社会责任感．2．时态：用一般现在时；3．人称：第一人称和第二人称；4．使用一些高级词汇、短语及句型，提高文章的档次；5．恰当运用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅．
【亮点说明】1．高级句型：Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.2．连词和插入语：As far as I know，Besides，What's more，Last but not the least，

解答 Dear Xiao lin，
     I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（高分句型一）
     As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．（高分句型二）Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．Last but not the least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（高分句型三）
     This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．