Question

20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中有
10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life．
In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要讲了如何采取措施来保证校园安全．

解答 Recently campus safety has become∧public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should
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always come firstly in our daily life．
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In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention
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to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with
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conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
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As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．
                                                                                 so                                                                            everyone
1．在become和public之间加a，考查冠词，concern作为名词，是可数名词，表示泛指前应使用不定冠词a．
2．causes改成caused，考查时态，表示过去发生的动作，应使用一般过去时．
3．firstly改成first，考查副词，first本身就是副词，修饰动词come．
4．measure改成measures，考查名词，measure"措施"是可数名词，此处应使用复数形式．
5．or改成and，考查连词，此处应是并列的关系，而不是选择，因此or改为and．
6．去掉of，考查连词，此处because后接的是从句，因此of去掉．
7．you改成we，考查代词，短文使用的是第一人称复数we，因此代词改为we．
8．that改成where，考查定语从句，句子先行词是surroundings，在从句中充当地点状语，因此使用where引导．
9．very改成so，考查固定句型，so…that…"如此…以致于…"．
10．anyone改成everyone，考查代词，根据语境应是"每一个人"使用everyone．

点评 这是高考的必考题型之一．在平时学习过程中，一定要注意基础方面．做此类题，一般分为几步：第一浏览全文，知道文章大意及主体时态；第二逐句理解，逐句改正．一般采取从粗到细的原则，如句意通顺的情况下，看句式结构、固定短语有有没有用错．具体到单词，我们常讲名词注意单复数，动词注意谓语、非谓语，形容词注意副词及比较级，从句注意连接词等．最后不要忘记重新过一遍文章，是否不当之处．