Question

5．假定你校正在开展"根除陋习、创建文明校园"活动．请你以此为主题用英语写一篇发言稿，向全校学生倡议：
1．根除：乱扔垃圾、浪费食物、吸烟…2．提倡：讲礼貌、互助…
Dear friends，
As is known to all，our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to
build a civilized campus．
         ．
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就学校目前正在开展的"根除陋习、创建文明校园"活动，写一篇发言稿，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：向全校学生倡议1．根除：乱扔垃圾、浪费食物、吸烟…2．提倡：讲礼貌、互助…．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为演讲主题．第二部分为"根除陋习、创建文明校园"活动的具体建议．
重点短语与句型：
As is known to all 众所周知
 launch a campaign 发起一项活动
in public在公共场合
contribute to为…作贡献
高分句型一：But I have noticed that a lot of bad behavior still exists in our school，which does great harm to the image of o ur school．
．此句用了which引导非限制性定语从句
高分句型二：Therefore，I strongly suggest that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public．此句suggest后宾语从句用虚拟语气，should可省略．

解答 Dear friends，
As is known to all，our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to establish a civilized campus．But I have noticed that a lot of bad behavior still exists in our school，which does great harm to the image of o ur school．（高分句型一）（演讲主题）
Therefore，I strongly suggest that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public（高分句型二）．Besides，no one should make dirty remarks or waste food．Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus．At the same time，we should perform good manners all the time and everywhere．We also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition．Once again I'm here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place．
（"根除陋习、创建文明校园"活动的具体建议）
    That's all．Thank you．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧