Question

5．假定你是我校高三学生李华，在学校看到如下通知，请根据通知的内容和写作要点向学校写一封申请信：

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Teachers and students from Central High School phoenix will visit our school two weeks later．Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends． REQUIREMENTS： ◇Can communicate in English． ◇A SEPARATE room is a MUST． ◇A private car is preferred． If interested，please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the Office of the principal before THURSDAY．Please consult us for any further information．

写作要点：
1．你对参与该活动的认识；
2．你的优势；
3．作为接待家庭的打算．
注意：
1．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数120字左右．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Three．___________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                   Yours sincerely，
      Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文为读写任务类作文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称为主，写作要点：1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的理由．
（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．
该句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句子指这件事情．
高分句型二）Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available
句子使用了not only…but also的导致句式，强调了我的优势，即擅长用英语沟通；
高级词汇：accommodation 食宿；exchange交换；meet all the requirements满足所有的要求；
过渡短语：In addition另外；In brief总之；

解答 Dear sir or Madam，
     I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Three．After seeing your notice in relation to the accommodation activity，I am eager to be one of the host families．（我对活动的认识） In my view，it will offer me a chance to improve my language skills．（高分句型一）In addition，we can exchange our cultures and customs with each other，which will surely benefit both of us．What matters most is that my family can meet all the requirements．（高分句型二）Not only am I skilled in English and good at communicating with foreigners freely and smoothly but also a separate room and a private car are available．（我的优势） When the foreign friends settle down，I surely will show them around the interesting places in our lovely city and treat them to delicious Chinese foods of all kinds．（我的打算） In brief，I am prepared to accommodate our friends．I would be grateful if you would take my application into account．
 Yours sincerely，
Li  Hua

点评 写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．