Question

1．下列表格为某市2006年2016年人们度假方式的情况比较，请用英语写一篇短文描述表格中的内容，并对度假方式的变化原因进行简单评析．

年度	2006	2016	原因
境外旅游	11%	22%	收入增加
海边度假	38%	31%	海水污染
爬山野营	11%	34%	亲近自然

注意：1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016．The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising，more people can afford the journeys abroad．
At the same time，the seaside attracted a lot of people．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away．
The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．The rate in 2016 is 34%，more than three times of that in 2006．The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息并对此结果发表你的看法．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息    2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
高分句型：
1．The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．
本句为that引导的宾语从句，后面为which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的句子；spend time doing sth花费时间做某事．
2．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．
本句为because引导的原因状语从句，主句包含短语drop from…to…从…下降到…；slightly为副词用来修饰动词短语drop．
3．The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．
本句为时间词作主语，谓语动词用see，表示"见证"；who引导一个定语从句，修饰先行词people．go climbing 去and camping爬山、宿营．

解答 The way people spend their holidays changed a lot in 2006 and 2016．（表格变化）
The table shows that 22% of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2016，which doubled that of 2006．（高分句型一）We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising，more people can afford the journeys abroad．（境外旅游）
At the same time，the seaside attracted a lot of people．However，the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2006 to 31% in 2016，because the sea water is being polluted．（高分句型二）The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away．（海边度假）
The year 2016 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping．（高分句型三）The rate in 2016 is 34%，more than three times of that in 2006．The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature．（爬山野营）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧